Not bad for a first attempt
Pretty good for a first flash, a lot better than most of the rubbish that people submit. It would have been nice to use a few extra characters rather than just Phoenix and Edward (is that his name? been a while since I played the game).
About your sound problem, if you go to properties for the sound and choose "stream" in the sync option it should match the sound to the flash exactly. Hope that helps.
Good luck with your next flash.
Big Thanks for help with Sound
And not "Edward" its "Miles Edgeworth" =D
But Ur review is full of true
My feelings on the movie
It could have been better,the charactar drawings were quite poor, you should
-make your charactars more simple (makes drawing and animating easier) or
-spend more time on them and practice drawing more or
-get someone else to do you charactar design while you work on the animation
the sound was alright, you should add subtitles makes everything easier.
The storyline seemed a little rushed and random, although I sort of got the general gist. At first I thought it was meant to be a funny animation.
Also the message at the end was good and positive, which makes a change for some stuff on newgrounds.
Anyway I hope some of that advice helped you, good luck.
It was quite good
Maybe you should try and make it longer because I liked the style, but it was over before I knew what was going on. As the last guy said you need better mics, but I thought it was a half decent flash and it shows you have potential to make something realy decent.
Good luck with your next one.
There are far too many of these types of flash movies, this was better than most though.
I have to admit I'm not a huge fan of Clay, but I realy liked this. The only flaw I seen (and this is me being pickey and trying realy hard to find a flaw in this) was the signpost at the start changing colour, but it's not even much of a problem.
Apart from that I loved the flash, not exactly deep, but easy and fun to watch, I loved the skull at the end and also the music was cool and suited it very well.
Keep up the good work.
I'm going to have to admit that the flashing signpost is the one thing I dislike the most in the flash as well. I was experimenting with adding color and shapes into the shots through Photoshop and it didn't work out as cool as I hoped. Oh well, Live and learn I guess.
Not one of my favourites
The charactar art was rushed and need more attention. The movie had potential, but unfortunatly it didn't realy reach that high a standard. The humour wasn't realy original and to be honest you could see the outcome a mile off. If you were going to re-make this, or make another flash I would use the text tool rather than write things out by hand, it just makes it look cheap.
However I appreciate it was your first flash so it wasn't that bad, you just need to wrok on a few things. Just one bit of advice, you made this to see what you could do and stuff , that doesn't mean you have to submit it to newgrounds, I'm a new flash artist and havent submitted anything yet, even though I have made at least 4 flash animations, for the simple reason that I don't want to be connected to them, I want to have flawless, good animations under my belt, everything else will just be practices that no one else will see.
I hope your next flash is more succesful, good luck.
learn to spell
Pretty cool I must admit.
I didn't realy get the story behind it, however te music sounded great and the anmation was pretty good. The only things about it were the bit at the start, it took me a while to work out you were traveling towards the village, just a bit confussing at first and also the walking anmation on the Ox (or whatever it was) wasn't to good. Apart from that I enjoyed it, I hope you bring out more stuff like it, just with a little more explaination.
Oh yeah I also liked the blue theme running through-out the movie.
I was impressed that you made the music and the video, although I didn't think the music was that great. The movement and animation was cool. I liked Dad's home more though (it's one of my favs)
A bit predictable in places, but other than that it made me laugh a few times. Nice one.
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