Not bad for a first attempt
Pretty good for a first flash, a lot better than most of the rubbish that people submit. It would have been nice to use a few extra characters rather than just Phoenix and Edward (is that his name? been a while since I played the game).
About your sound problem, if you go to properties for the sound and choose "stream" in the sync option it should match the sound to the flash exactly. Hope that helps.
Good luck with your next flash.
Big Thanks for help with Sound
And not "Edward" its "Miles Edgeworth" =D
But Ur review is full of true
It was quite good
Maybe you should try and make it longer because I liked the style, but it was over before I knew what was going on. As the last guy said you need better mics, but I thought it was a half decent flash and it shows you have potential to make something realy decent.
Good luck with your next one.
fanko0o
Impressed me
I have to admit I'm not a huge fan of Clay, but I realy liked this. The only flaw I seen (and this is me being pickey and trying realy hard to find a flaw in this) was the signpost at the start changing colour, but it's not even much of a problem.
Apart from that I loved the flash, not exactly deep, but easy and fun to watch, I loved the skull at the end and also the music was cool and suited it very well.
Keep up the good work.
I'm going to have to admit that the flashing signpost is the one thing I dislike the most in the flash as well. I was experimenting with adding color and shapes into the shots through Photoshop and it didn't work out as cool as I hoped. Oh well, Live and learn I guess.
Not one of my favourites
The charactar art was rushed and need more attention. The movie had potential, but unfortunatly it didn't realy reach that high a standard. The humour wasn't realy original and to be honest you could see the outcome a mile off. If you were going to re-make this, or make another flash I would use the text tool rather than write things out by hand, it just makes it look cheap.
However I appreciate it was your first flash so it wasn't that bad, you just need to wrok on a few things. Just one bit of advice, you made this to see what you could do and stuff , that doesn't mean you have to submit it to newgrounds, I'm a new flash artist and havent submitted anything yet, even though I have made at least 4 flash animations, for the simple reason that I don't want to be connected to them, I want to have flawless, good animations under my belt, everything else will just be practices that no one else will see.
I hope your next flash is more succesful, good luck.
learn to spell
Cool
I liked this cos I made an anti-clock movie too, (not this account) but it was rushed cos I wanted to be finished before Clock day was over. I like the message in this movie.
Cool, did you submit it yet? I'll have to see it. we are at war, it won't be easy. Anti-Clocks will rule the portal... mark my words.
hmmm
I don't speak very good french so this video was already at a disadvantage. You used a movie maker title screen and credits, just goes to show you have a poor grasp of flash. If you sat down and practiced and got something decent out of it you could get a better score.
Thanks for your comment you help me !
Parts were good
It was funny in places but badly done in others. My main problem was the music during the first bit wth Mario and Luigi, it kept repeating and it annoyed me so much. Apart from that it had some good moments, especially the "Magic Pipe".
Keep at it
your badly done
Well done
Very well animated, I realy love your style and the way everything seemed to fit in so well with the artwork. The random lines were very good at mixing up each piece into the next one. I realy hope you bring out more of this stuff.
Alright. Maybe you'd like to participate in the next one. :)
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